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My Project -- feedback requested

SerienSerien Member CommonPosts: 8,460
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hi!

i just finished my part of the project, and i was wondering if you guys could give me feedback

please be serious, and let me know what you got from it, (what happened in the story)

sum the story up

and just give me general feedback

thanks, it would be much appreciated

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  • SerienSerien Member CommonPosts: 8,460

    k i slowed it down a bit

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  • digitydarkmandigitydarkman Member Posts: 2,194
    and what exactly is this for.....?

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    Ohh Im So Scary... BOO

  • UiruruUiruru Member Posts: 984
    Honestly Murt... I think this might honestly be the stupidest thing I have ever seen... no offence... maybe you should do it in Flash and then just give us a link...

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  • digitydarkmandigitydarkman Member Posts: 2,194

    lol

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  • SatansDiscipleSatansDisciple Member Posts: 2,782

    what kind of project is that murt?!?! and i think you could have done better people, since they dont move.
    haha, nice 1 digity though.

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  • DesperadoDesperado Member Posts: 467

    Feedback requested eh?....Ok, you asked for it..

    I think this was just a ploy to gain more complements based off the success of your thanksgiving day turkey spoof.  The artwork is crap, but the overall story is enjoyable if not somewhat predictable. 

    Sorry, I'm a little harsh when it comes to reviews.  Cheers! image

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  • SerienSerien Member CommonPosts: 8,460

    no not like that

    its like 10% of the proj

    i have to let the class know what happened in the Gift of the Magi....

    ...k?

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  • Iceman12321Iceman12321 Member Posts: 992
    good luck buddy, gooood luckimage

  • SerienSerien Member CommonPosts: 8,460
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  • UiruruUiruru Member Posts: 984

    LOL... yeah what is with the gif?? use something better like flash. imageimageimage

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    A: 73% S: 66% K: 33% E: 26%

  • SerienSerien Member CommonPosts: 8,460

    just one problem

    i duno how to use flash!

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  • RasukeRasuke Member Posts: 362

    I'd just like to say... I've never seen a story so brutaly murdered before... You tell the story if that's what you want, but I think it's a... well... I'm not sure I have a word to describe exactly what I think you did to it...  Personally, I must say...  do not show this to your teacher if they care at all about literature.  Anyway, as I said, if you just want to get the story across... it's ok... but I personally think it's bad.

    EDIT:  Actually, given more time to reflect I have seen worse...


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  • SquareSquare Member Posts: 254
    Really, it's not that bad for a 9th grade IT(?) project.

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  • ZoharZohar Member Posts: 673
    I remember that story... such a sad depressing Christmas story =( At least that's what I thought when I read it.

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  • DekronDekron Member UncommonPosts: 7,359

    Some homley looking characters :) I, uh, guess they're lucky to just have each other?  Or something. 

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  • ShmeeShmee Member Posts: 321
    pschhh its nothing compared to my bad ass 9th grade microworlds project.

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  • SerienSerien Member CommonPosts: 8,460

    lol

    ok ok

    i got the point...

    it sucks...but hey it's only part of the whole

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