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Normally i'm not a grammer/spelling maniac
but the ad for war of angels feels wrong
"A war broke out already"
Not sure how ads go if the marketers give you a banner and you just post it or if they tell you what they want it to say and you put it out there
But it seems really odd for english
Should be something closer to
A war has broken out
or something to that extent.
I guess i'm just saying if it's editable it should be because i'm not sure thats proper english and it's going to deter some people away instead of enticing them in (which is the point of the ad in the first place)